BE WARE! CAUTION! GROUNDHOG! BIG WORDS! BIG FONTS! EXCLAMATION!!!!
Once upon an era there was a timid and juvenile ground hog named Bobo. His father was an elderly, plump ground hog named Coco. Coco was a very vulgar to other animals that were not his species; he despised foxes and other animals he and named them all boorish, dim and unsightly, unlike himself of course. His son Bobo did not feel the same way his father did of other animals.
As a consequence, he was not permitted to set out into the wilderness unless he desired to go to the lavatory. When ever another animal came near Coco would bark at them and enlighten them to SCAT or GET. One day Bobo determined to help his father Coco be more welcome to other animals. So as a ground hog he determined to tunnel his way elsewhere of his hole that he called home.
When he surfaced from his tunnel, he proposed that he had no evidence of where he was. He contemplated of how he would get home when he was finished with his undertaking, being very dimwitted he never thought of following his tunnel back home and just kept on moving.
As he was crawling though the dense wilderness he ran into a fox. Eventually he decided to confront it, and speak to it. When he did so the fox twisted and looked downward at him with a dazed look on his face. “H-hello m-my name is B-b-Bobo what is y-yours” Bobo said, scared and stuttering. “My name is Astro nice to meet you” said the fox in a kind voice. This fox was not similar to the way his father Coco described foxes to be. So he asked the fox to be his friend and to help him get his father to think differently about other species. The fox accepted him because no one else had accepted him, he was an outcast and no one had ever asked him to be their friend.
When they arrived at Bobo’s hole they noticed that Coco departed a short time ago. So they waited for the instance to pass, and Coco to come home. As soon as Coco came home they observed that he had a comrade with him. Coco and his comrade, who was very scrawny but very brawny, trotted right past them and into a hole that Bobo had not saw prior to his escape. After about half of an hour Coco came up to them and told them about his companion, his name was Troy and that he had met him when he took Bobo’s advice about going and meeting new animals.Bobo’s response to this was very vulgar because he had meant for Coco to meet animals that were not ground hogs. Out of the shadows came Astro he said “Yeah like your son Bobo, he set out and met me I am a fox…….” Coco’s face looked as though he had just had had a heart attack. But in truth Coco had not been scared of Astro, but of the two large Wolves behind them.
The Wolves snickered at his insolence and snuck forward, moving on silent paws. Coco pointed at them and Astro looked back just as Bobo did. They all ran towards their hole, (luckily Astro was a small fox and could fit into the hole) when they got into the hole it seemed as though Astro was a ground hog because he got along with Coco and Troy. The Wolves sat there and waited for them to peak their heads out.
But they knew that they were there and so they waited for them to leave but the wolves kept on waiting. All of the sudden Astro had an idea and asked Bobo where the hole was that he used to get to the inside of the forest. Bobo’s response was quick for he was scared out of his mind. They all got into the hole and left the Wolves behind.
When they got out they all leaped and frolicked for joy because they had cheated death. Coco had regretted thinking other animals that were not ground hogs were all dim-witted and accepted Astro into the family. They made new larger holes so that all creatures big and small could fit into them when they were in need of shelter.
Never Judge people and never put people into categories just because they are different.
Brian Griffin said,
November 7, 2005 @ 2:06 pm
why did you write this and what is it for
still pretty cool!!
Administrator said,
November 7, 2005 @ 5:40 pm
This is a nice story. It’s strength is in it’s concept of overcoming differences in the face of danger. If you feel like taking this story to the next level, use descriptions that make us feel the danger of the wolves. I think this could make a great story to teach younger kids about the importance of overcoming stereotypes. Keep writing and editing!