Always receiving
Shimpuku Uezono
L.A. Period 2
10/27/05
I keep receiving a gift that I never stop getting yet,
Not even for a second for it had been flowing into me for my entire existence,
from every second since on the day you were born, for life and eternity even after you’re dead your parents will still love you.
Some do not, how awful it is how they don’t have parents who always loved them,
Because of divorce and problems of this dead corrupted world.
You feel happiness, joy and appreciation with gratitude from this force.
The love from your parents and receiving true love from anything are the greatest gift in the world that anyone can ever ask for.
Administrator said,
November 7, 2005 @ 5:46 pm
I’m looking for focus in poems, details, and a personal voice.
Your have focus and you explore the topic.
I’d love to hear specific details and examples to demostrate the feelings you touch on here.
Your voice is strong.