Comments on: Turtle http://room132.com/2005/10/31/turtle/ A collaborative blog experiment from room 132. Tue, 06 Jan 2009 23:27:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: Administrator http://room132.com/2005/10/31/turtle/#comment-117 Administrator Tue, 08 Nov 2005 01:56:33 +0000 http://room132.com/index.php/2005/10/31/turtle/#comment-117 I'm looking for focus, details, and a personal voice in your poem. Your poem has all three. Great job! I once had a very slow computer and I could relate. Keep up the good work! I’m looking for focus, details, and a personal voice in your poem.

Your poem has all three. Great job! I once had a very slow computer and I could relate. Keep up the good work!

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