Comments on: Cookies http://room132.com/2005/10/30/cookies/ A collaborative blog experiment from room 132. Wed, 07 Jan 2009 05:28:54 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: Administrator http://room132.com/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-122 Administrator Tue, 08 Nov 2005 02:24:44 +0000 http://room132.com/index.php/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-122 I'm looking for focus, details, and a personal voice in poems. Your poem is focused on... cookies! You have nice details with anticipation at the end. You've gotten some interesting responses to this too! I’m looking for focus, details, and a personal voice in poems.

Your poem is focused on… cookies!

You have nice details with anticipation at the end.

You’ve gotten some interesting responses to this too!

]]> By: Simon http://room132.com/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-111 Simon Thu, 03 Nov 2005 01:17:19 +0000 http://room132.com/index.php/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-111 I like cookies I wish i could have some right now Some of those delicious cookies Those delicious chocolate chip cookies Cooked on a pan, in an oven Melting in my belly That is where i want them to be I like cookies
I wish i could have some right now
Some of those delicious cookies
Those delicious chocolate chip cookies
Cooked on a pan, in an oven
Melting in my belly
That is where i want them to be

]]> By: Matty Lau http://room132.com/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-110 Matty Lau Wed, 02 Nov 2005 03:49:13 +0000 http://room132.com/index.php/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-110 Sugary vanilla chocolate smells tickling my imagination Oh, but you have none to share? my drooling mouth gaping in disappointment Sugary vanilla chocolate smells
tickling my imagination
Oh, but you have none to share?
my drooling mouth
gaping in disappointment

]]> By: Dennis http://room132.com/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-108 Dennis Tue, 01 Nov 2005 20:00:25 +0000 http://room132.com/index.php/2005/10/30/cookies/#comment-108 That was a really cool poem. I wish I had some cookies now! That was a really cool poem. I wish I had some cookies now!

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