Moon-Shadowed Eyes
The dog sits lazily on his bed,
He stares with his moon-shadowed eyes trying to entertain himself,
His eyes are a assortment of colors, like a box of chocolates,
They sparkle with such a powerful aura they light up the room,
I stare at him in awe for i have never withold such beauty,
I feel warm inside like butterflies come into your stomach,
He seems not to notice im watching him,
I have never seen such moon-shadowed eyes.
Administrator said,
November 13, 2005 @ 5:39 pm
I’m looking for focus, details, and a personal voice in poems.
You’ve got focus.
You’ve got details.
You’ve got a personal voice here. You left me wondering what moon-shadowed eyes look like. I’d love hear more about your relationship with your dog and what you thought about that time when you noticed his eyes.